tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post1318489980050230478..comments2023-06-28T13:47:43.983+01:00Comments on Autumn: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-40560375631494368172010-11-04T08:42:29.657+00:002010-11-04T08:42:29.657+00:00The result is lovely!The result is lovely!Beatrice Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-2020115458975773232010-11-03T21:49:17.740+00:002010-11-03T21:49:17.740+00:00..Vida..>it reads quite
marvelously now; 't.....Vida..>it reads quite<br />marvelously now; 'tis a <br />wonderful poem..it's only<br />right to remove an article<br />from where one doesn't<br />belong..you're welcomedSpiros Zafirishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545803839184857732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-82574042202474806622010-11-03T12:53:55.814+00:002010-11-03T12:53:55.814+00:00Hi Spiros,
Do not read it tomorrow, you may not l...Hi Spiros,<br /><br />Do not read it tomorrow, you may not like it at all :))<br /><br />I am applying the changes that you proposed! There was something missing in the 4th line. I was thinking of repeating ‘should’ but ‘must’ is better. Thank you!<br />And, I really appreciate your help with the correctness - my English is far from perfect :)Vidahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09445214590810247776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-44890722892878544012010-11-03T05:23:59.582+00:002010-11-03T05:23:59.582+00:00..sorry, me again (it
was I who deleted last
comm.....sorry, me again (it<br />was I who deleted last <br />comment, cause it wasn't<br />just right..anyways,<br />in Line 5, you don't need<br />an article; more correct<br />without:<br />or wait<br />for spring to uncover it<br />---------<br />myself, i prefer:<br /><br />or must I wait<br />for spring to uncover it<br /><br />..>>spiros<br />-------------Spiros Zafirishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545803839184857732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-33213882372924893382010-11-03T05:05:39.352+00:002010-11-03T05:05:39.352+00:00..this one is much more
lovely today, than when i .....this one is much more<br />lovely today, than when i <br />read it yesterday..i'm<br />almost afraid to approach<br />it tomorrow..>>spirosSpiros Zafirishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545803839184857732noreply@blogger.com