tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post3093299799821775066..comments2023-06-28T13:47:43.983+01:00Comments on Autumn: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-32814786405534856552009-10-19T15:57:47.096+01:002009-10-19T15:57:47.096+01:00Thank you, Diana!Thank you, Diana!Kelly M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07281523503121981821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-54636013321748306972009-10-18T22:32:40.440+01:002009-10-18T22:32:40.440+01:00Very rich.Very rich.diana l.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12508598285292827626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-90634628530011583402009-10-17T15:25:14.778+01:002009-10-17T15:25:14.778+01:00Ah, yes . . . Thank you, Alan -- I fiddled with th...Ah, yes . . . Thank you, Alan -- I fiddled with that one too, too much. You begin to lose sight of the original intent after awhile!Kelly M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07281523503121981821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-51982067885945620302009-10-17T12:58:17.330+01:002009-10-17T12:58:17.330+01:00a topography of dreams
I carry through the day
sto...<i>a topography of dreams<br />I carry through the day<br />stones in a pocket --</i><br /><br />I love that first line, but feel it's so good it could be a pivotal line.<br /><br />e.g.<br /><br /><i>stones in a pocket<br />the topography of dreams<br />I carry through the day</i><br /><br />Alan<br /><a href="http://tiny.cc/1000VerseRenga" rel="nofollow">1000 Verse Renga</a><br />.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com