tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post5632676872750698804..comments2023-06-28T13:47:43.983+01:00Comments on Autumn: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-13171390877817130692009-09-09T15:55:56.698+01:002009-09-09T15:55:56.698+01:00You are very kind, Alan. Thank you.You are very kind, Alan. Thank you.Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-43541509223783777562009-09-09T15:34:25.555+01:002009-09-09T15:34:25.555+01:00.
Absolutely stunning!
I adore that first line!
....<br />Absolutely stunning!<br /><br />I adore that first line!<br /><br /><i>eggshell skies<br />in the cemetery<br />two fritillaries</i><br /><br />There's a lot of resonance, allusion, and layers here, simply marvelous! <br /><br />all my best,<br />Alan<br /><a href="http://www.withwords.org.uk/results.html" rel="nofollow">With Words Online Haiku Competition Results</a><br />.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com