tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post5961772751093959501..comments2023-06-28T13:47:43.983+01:00Comments on Autumn: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-71938088637558609652009-09-24T13:57:02.296+01:002009-09-24T13:57:02.296+01:00Yes you are right. I will rewrite it yet once agai...Yes you are right. I will rewrite it yet once again.<br /><br />love-Melanie BishopCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-90357950604796574032009-09-24T05:17:16.375+01:002009-09-24T05:17:16.375+01:00Wow! Less is certainly more. I think this is an ...Wow! Less is certainly more. I think this is an amazing improvement. Much more powerful.<br /><br />My mind keeps switching the last two lines. What do you think? (and do you mean "summer's"?)diana l.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12508598285292827626noreply@blogger.com