tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post708104946231353727..comments2023-06-28T13:47:43.983+01:00Comments on Autumn: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-32100193749468599452009-09-30T16:16:02.378+01:002009-09-30T16:16:02.378+01:00I like it -- again a pearl captures a sense of tim...I like it -- again a pearl captures a sense of timelessness, a treasured article of beauty -- but then oblivion negates that, doesn't it?Kelly M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07281523503121981821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-15432453339353789252009-09-29T22:02:29.053+01:002009-09-29T22:02:29.053+01:00I'd replace the word 'pearl'I'd replace the word 'pearl'Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14343643387576533616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-64653732554099459012009-09-28T21:46:55.245+01:002009-09-28T21:46:55.245+01:00most gracious of you, ruma -- many thanks!most gracious of you, ruma -- many thanks!Kelly M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07281523503121981821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-62103806150569956902009-09-28T04:04:52.882+01:002009-09-28T04:04:52.882+01:00This haiku catches rainy movement and brightness m...This haiku catches rainy movement and brightness momentarily. And you bury one's feelings and thought in transient to disappear immediately in that. This haiku is wide and there is depth. The theme is a small thing such as the raindrop. rumarumahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08802179941417961681noreply@blogger.com