tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post9122271504026797443..comments2023-06-28T13:47:43.983+01:00Comments on Autumn: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-46783391493135985772009-10-12T00:25:16.703+01:002009-10-12T00:25:16.703+01:00Great help to have feedback. Tanku! :-)Great help to have feedback. Tanku! :-)Jenn Jilkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05259681360456905055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-24455296435830126142009-09-13T10:40:52.014+01:002009-09-13T10:40:52.014+01:00i think that would make a nice tanka...
I always e...i think that would make a nice tanka...<br />I always enjoy your images.<br /><br /><br />the sounds of mallards fall to the next pondAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-64945229019722889892009-09-09T16:05:44.696+01:002009-09-09T16:05:44.696+01:00Thanks Jenn! ;-)
Love the photo, crows are always...Thanks Jenn! ;-)<br /><br />Love the photo, crows are always photogenic and entertaining. ;-)<br /><br />all my best,<br />Alan<br /><a href="http://www.withwords.org.uk/results.html" rel="nofollow">With Words Online Haiku Competition Results</a><br />.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-62303016856373644992009-09-09T15:38:22.316+01:002009-09-09T15:38:22.316+01:00Dear mysterious person ;-)
crows become restless
...Dear mysterious person ;-)<br /><br /><i>crows become restless<br />gathering in murder<br />--in a moment they are gone<br /><br />overhead the cacophony of sound<br />together they fly in formation<br />--only the swift and strong shall return</i><br /><br />I was wondering if this could be put into a tanka"ish" five line form maybe? <br /><br />e.g.<br /><br /><i>restless crows<br />gathering in murder<br />and cacophony of sound<br /><br />together they fly in formation<br />only the quick and strong return</i><br /><br />all my best,<br />Alan<br /><a href="http://www.withwords.org.uk/results.html" rel="nofollow">With Words Online Haiku Competition Results</a><br />.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com