tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post5259972488924492220..comments2023-06-28T13:47:43.983+01:00Comments on Autumn: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-8104548796186181522009-09-16T22:59:56.650+01:002009-09-16T22:59:56.650+01:00Thank you KellyThank you KellyRachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-56436396431535644232009-09-16T20:34:08.939+01:002009-09-16T20:34:08.939+01:00like the sound of the cawing -- a rough, harsh sou...like the sound of the cawing -- a rough, harsh sound -- paired with 'silhouette' -- very cool!Kelly M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07281523503121981821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-5316763068507895502009-09-16T11:31:08.705+01:002009-09-16T11:31:08.705+01:00Thank you PaulThank you PaulRachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-54879490451422537382009-09-16T10:57:08.005+01:002009-09-16T10:57:08.005+01:00Excellent haiku Rachel! I really enjoyed this.Excellent haiku Rachel! I really enjoyed this.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-79675935561983148172009-09-16T09:18:13.090+01:002009-09-16T09:18:13.090+01:00Thank you Alan.
I may have to order that ;)Thank you Alan.<br /><br />I may have to order that ;)Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-85039305633757519282009-09-16T08:34:34.701+01:002009-09-16T08:34:34.701+01:00.
We love something about the call of a bird in th....<br />We love something about the call of a bird in the wild! ;-)<br /><br />James (Hackett) started this, in English, some 30 years ago with:<br /><br /><i> Searching on the wind,<br />the hawk's cry . . .<br />is the shape of its beak.</i><br /><br />A few of mine:<br /><i><br />fading last note<br />a torresian crow sounds<br />the darkening sky<br /><br />carrion crow call<br />refracted river-ripples<br />on the horsechestnut<br /><br />carrion crow call<br />the river reflects it<br />in the horsechestnut</i><br /><br />Some more crowing ;-)<br /><br /><i>mist haze -<br />a crow cleans its beak<br />on a rooftop aerial<br /><br />Wing Beats: British Birds in Haiku ISBN 978-1-903543-24-5 (2008)</i><br /><br />I highly recommend Wing Beats to anyone, even outside Britain.<br /><br />Wing Beats website:<br /><a href="http://www.wingbeats.co.uk" rel="nofollow">Wing Beats: British Birds in Haiku</a><br />.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com