tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post6588864386686453134..comments2023-06-28T13:47:43.983+01:00Comments on Autumn: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-29883237045840849812009-09-02T00:01:08.829+01:002009-09-02T00:01:08.829+01:00I agree with Paul, a good poem but it needs a kire...I agree with Paul, a good poem but it needs a kire (kireji).<br /><br />AlanArea 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-32034278740366904822009-09-01T15:18:14.324+01:002009-09-01T15:18:14.324+01:00yes great one
johnyes great one<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-55645846275391297922009-09-01T14:21:30.608+01:002009-09-01T14:21:30.608+01:00David I really like the humour here. It makes me t...David I really like the humour here. It makes me think of a very long restful summer! I wonder if the omission of 'I am' from L1 would polish this a little more.<br /><br />Humbly<br />PaulPaul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.com