tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post9016597401464740380..comments2023-06-28T13:47:43.983+01:00Comments on Autumn: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-16302625585941529952009-09-04T11:18:36.818+01:002009-09-04T11:18:36.818+01:00Thank you, Alan. Much improved.Thank you, Alan. Much improved.Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6760016053841385759.post-85725109791769077612009-09-04T10:57:56.439+01:002009-09-04T10:57:56.439+01:00I love this! My cat used to sleep at the bottom o...I love this! My cat used to sleep at the bottom of a 50sq foot bed I made from milk crates and foam strips. ;-)<br /><br /><i>wind and rain<br />the cat sleeps in the spare room<br />overnight </i><br /><br />I don't think you need 'overnight' as 'sleeps' suggests that.<br /><br /><i>wind and rain<br />the cat sleeps <br />in the spare room</i><br /><br />Alan<br /><a href="http://area17.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Area 17</a><br />.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com