One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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deep autumn
my neighbor
how does he live

Basho
(version by Alan Summers)


2 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

I liked this-
Maybe something the season evokes and you'd think in passing..

Alan Summers said...

Thank you! ;-)

all my best,
Alan
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