One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

autumn wind
a sparrow riding
my car antenna


Pamela A. Babusci
prev. pub.

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Love it!

It also shows a good use of WHEN to use 'ing'! ;-)

It's so immediate, I feel I'm in that car with a sparrow on my car aerial and I don't even have a car, and I'm sitting in my kitchen with a cup of rosy lee! ;-)

Alan

Alan Summers said...

Just love reading this one!

Alan
Area 17
Alan's BBC interview
Antony Gormley's Fourth Plinth
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Pamela A. Babusci said...

dear alan,
thanks SO much for your
kind words!
hugs, pamela