Hi Diana! ;-)cool night-fingered hairpulsing cicadastime's arrhythmiaI keep coming back to this poem.I wonder if you could edit it a different way, and remove "time's"?e.g.arrhythmiamy cool night-fingered hairpulsing cicadasarrhythmia: wikipedia linkall my best,AlanWith Words.
I wasn't really pleased with "time's" either, but was at a loss otherwise.I think I like your version minus "my".arrhythmiacool night-fingered hairpulsing cicadas
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