Oh! I love this. So soulful
Thank you so much! I appreciate your saying so.
I love the simplicity of the photograph it's stunning! Did you take it? I'd love to see more of your work on this site.I feel you have a gift for tanka type poetry, I was wondering if you used the five line set up for a while it might bring out more of a tanka? e.g.From:coolness lingers on a dewy dayloon mourning in the lake--one red leaf fallsto:coolness lingers on a dewy daythe loon mourns in the lakeone red leaf fallsall my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
Alan, I think you're trying to teach an old dog new tricks! I will have to research tanka, though. Thanks for the suggestion.
Hi Jenn!You're younger than me! Don't get too daunted by tanka when you research it, as you already have a tanka voice!AlanArea 17Alan's BBC interviewAntony Gormley's Fourth Plinth.
I got mixed up..of course I read your previous haiku..this is beautiful-
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