One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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divorce plan
a broken branch totters
in the autumn wind

From my book, Rustle of bamboo leaves

5 comments:

Leatherdykeuk said...

oh! melancholy.

Paul Smith said...

The fragility of 'things' is captured wonderfully here Vic.

Pamela A. Babusci said...

good one vic!!

Kelly M. said...

like the image of "totters" -- leaves the reader on the edge somewhat?

Vic Gendrano said...

Thank you all, very much for your kind comments. I'm kind of reserving my new poems for publication elsewhere (smile!), hence I got this one from my book instead. Here's my blog, btw, as my old and original website in Yahoo's Geocities will close next month.

http://haikuharvest.blogspot.com/