One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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the first leaves fall
when they are still green
how can this be?
you spinning in that wheelchair
after vertigo treatments

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I really like this Diana.

You have a lot of strong control over language here. Looking forward to more of these poems from you! ;-)

all my best,
Alan
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diana l. said...

Thank you so much, Alan. (What a nice way to start the day, reading this comment from you!)