One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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autumn wind -
making kites
of the leaves

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

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Great! So simple but wonderfully deep, and resonating with both childhood memories and those when a teenager, and well, all my ages. ;-)

Alan
Area 17
Alan's BBC interview
Antony Gormley's Fourth Plinth
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David said...

good one. Playful, simple.

Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

aha, I like this very much.

love-Melanie Bishop

diana l. said...

Simply perfect.