I really like this!We laughEating our apple pieLike fools Do you need so many capital (uppercase) letters in so short a poem? Uppercase letters in haiku always make me think I should see it as an acrostic poem.This is so alive and immediate as a haiku I don't want any distractions. ;-)we laugheating our apple pielike fools AlanArea 17.
point taken, it's a habit I've formed
terrific - two zen monksjohn
Isn't being foolish wonderful? Lovely haiku.
I can feel the joy in occasional foolishness!R K
I love it!
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