One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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where are they,
the fireflies, the laughter?
september moon

8 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

Thoughtful pondering to this backdrop of changing elements- Nice

John McDonald said...

good one andrew
john

Alan Summers said...

Wonderful! Wonderful!

Beatrice V said...

Ah... this is a trademark 'Andrew longing' haiku! Beautiful

Wandering spirit said...

Irresistible..

Paul Smith said...

An excellent haiku Andrew.

diana l. said...

I love that it is posed as a question. Precisely captured feeling.

Michele said...

What is poetry without poignancy?