Love this john. So many layers to ponder!I imagine the 'broken things' with faces, breathless and wounded!
Love the first line!Intrigued about what the broken things are, a sort of variation of flotsam and jetsam?I really do like the whole poem! ;-)Alan
wind in the chimney -- that often is such a haunting sound, as does this haiku.
Good one John, preparing for the storm to come-Autumn windsounding the chimney alarmrattling with arms
Compelling. Causes me to reread it repeatedly. Well done.
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