One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

again, I find myself
on this river-side bench
in the rain
with no reason
to move on

Modern English Tanka V3 No4 Summer 2009

4 comments:

diana l. said...

:(

David said...

This is really good Paul.

John McDonald said...

love it
john

Paul Smith said...

Thank you All for your comments.