One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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burning leaves -
smoke
writhing

4 comments:

Paul Smith said...

I can smell it John! Great poem.

Leatherdykeuk said...

Ah! The scents of autumn!

diana l. said...

Makes me sad that our camping trip got rained out this weekend. :(

Ashi said...

Love this one John, I can see and smell the scene