One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

clouds form
as the wind shifts
chestnuts shiver

4 comments:

Dennis Tomlinson said...

I can feel the shivering of the trees!

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Dennis

diana l. said...

Nice imagery.

Perhaps it would be stronger without "overhead" and "direction." What do you think?

Rachel Green said...

Diana! Yes indeed! Thank you.