One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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A forest trail
dry leaves whisper
stillness

5 comments:

nora said...

really lovely, Ashi!

BTW, I like what you did to the haiku via Magyar. I think yours were better than the original. :-)

John McDonald said...

good one
john

Leatherdykeuk said...

lovely

Kelly Marszycki said...

quietly evocative --

diana l. said...

Aahhhh. Beautiful.