One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

on the darkest nights
the moon allures me
to gaze upon it for hours
and i try to forget
the emptiness of my life


Pamela A. Babusci
first pub. in American Tanka
& in: A Thousand Reasons

1 comment:

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Beautiful Pamela. Would you still consider checking my Haiku. I really don't know what is right or wrong.
I could email them to you and you could tell me what I am doing wrong. I been so ill and have missed a lot prompts and poems. If you are not too busy maybe you could help. I really love Haiku Tanka and all the forms.
We could wait until after Thanksgiving

love,Melanie