One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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this morning's birdsong --
tinged with frost

2 comments:

ruma2008 said...

As for this haiku, a voice without the form and transparent frost are very impressive.

I excite my imagination.
It is a good work.
ruma

Kelly Marszycki said...

Thank you, ruma2008 -- good of you to visit!