One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


gusty wind
the acorns pop
under my feet


Kelly Marszycki said...

excellent sounds to this one -- love it!

Alan Summers said...

I love it, so simple, but a dream to read and experience. Full of sensations!

The Super Renga

Dennis Tomlinson said...

Thanks, Kelly and Alan. The word 'pop' just came to me spontaneously as I stepped on the fallen acorns!