One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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gusty wind
the acorns pop
under my feet

3 comments:

Kelly Marszycki said...

excellent sounds to this one -- love it!

Alan Summers said...

I love it, so simple, but a dream to read and experience. Full of sensations!

Alan
The Super Renga
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Dennis Tomlinson said...

Thanks, Kelly and Alan. The word 'pop' just came to me spontaneously as I stepped on the fallen acorns!