nightshade berriesblood-red on leafless stemspolice sirens Maybe switch the lines around a bit?police sirensnightshade berries blood-red on leafless stemsall my best,AlanArea 17.
Thank you Alan. Yes - the swich brings a tighter verse. Thank you.
and very dramatic.. good
Thanks Ashi!
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nightshade berries
blood-red on leafless stems
police sirens
Maybe switch the lines around a bit?
police sirens
nightshade berries blood-red
on leafless stems
all my best,
Alan
Area 17
.
Thank you Alan. Yes - the swich brings a tighter verse. Thank you.
and very dramatic.. good
Thanks Ashi!
Post a Comment