One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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pale daybreak--
my son mourns for
a dead bug

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I like this very much. Very simple, but it has layers. Lovely.

Alan
1000 Verse Renga Project
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Carlos Gesmundo said...

Makes me think of stuff I mourned in my youth...

John McDonald said...

yes good one
john