Fantastic! I don't know if you meant it as a metaphor (as well) but brilliant!Very fresh, and I'll always think of one headlamp rusty cabs now.Alan1000 Verse Renga Project
Thanks, Alan! I didn't mean it as a metaphor but I did personify the vehicle a bit: while the clouds race overhead, this old, derelict London taxi is no longer capable of doing the job it once did.
a sense of maybe its' last run? good one, Dennis!
Unfortunatley it's in the graveyard already!
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