One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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Autumn

falling rain
darkness passes
in silence

3 comments:

Möme said...

This works on many levels, love it.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

I can hardly wait for first light...and maybe a rainbow.

Beatrice V said...

Very very nice, I love the implied 'sound' of the rain opposed to the 'quietness' of darkness.