One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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Rising mists
now cast a different light
--on our affair

4 comments:

Möme said...

Lovely, with a great sense of something lost.

Vida said...

or, a new beginning? :) I like it!

Alan Summers said...

Good haiku, almost tankaesque too.

all my very best

Alan
2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink
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Beatrice V said...

Thanks, Mome, Vida and Alan.