One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


Rising mists
now cast a different light
--on our affair


Möme said...

Lovely, with a great sense of something lost.

Vida said...

or, a new beginning? :) I like it!

Area 17 said...

Good haiku, almost tankaesque too.

all my very best

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Beatrice V said...

Thanks, Mome, Vida and Alan.