One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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a bed of cold ash--
all that remains of old fires
our passion spent


5 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Yes, fab!

Alan

Beatrice V said...

Hi Alan, thanks! I do love fire and now in winter find it quite an inspiration.

Spiros Zafiris said...

..i must agree..after a few reads,
the sobering lyricism takes one
back to ages past..>>spiros

Beatrice V said...

Thanks Spiro.

Shauna said...

authentic