One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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woodsmoke
a bee clings to the last stalk
of lavender


(trad. Alan Summers)

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une abeille s'agrippe
au dernier brin de lavande -
odeur de feu de bois

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Hi Damien,

You might consider:

woodsmoke
a bee clings to the last stalk
of lavender


all my best,

Alan

Damien Gabriels said...

Thank You Alan, I keep your translation !

All my best

Damien

Alan Summers said...

Thanks Damien, I'm honoured!

all my very best

Alan
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