One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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celibate
he talks about
sickle moon

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I really like this.

Just one suggestion, maybe:

celibate
he talks about
the sickle moon


all my best,
Alan

Spiros Zafiris said...

..quite an excellent one


.spiros

Wandering spirit said...

Thank you, Alan and Spiros..