One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

crisp morning
my breath races me
to the car

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Love the immediacy!

Alan

Diane Mayr said...

Such a novel way of seeing!

Jim Tantillo said...

this one is very good, particularly with the car image.

Möme said...

I really like it too.