One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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garden bearded in frost
the year is showing its' age -- 

4 comments:

Vida said...

I really like that!

Möme said...

I love it too!

Kelly M. said...

Thanks! :-)

Alan Summers said...

I really like this!

I don't think you need the apostophe though.

all my very best

Alan
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