One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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house of the lock -
a light plume of blue smoke
as wind indicator

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maison de l'écluse -
un filet de fumée bleue
comme girouette

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

Interesting haiku.

"The house of the Lock is a fishing cottage, situated not far from mollières of the Somme."

Quai Jules Verne
St Valery sur Somme

I enjoyed the haiku.

all my very best

Alan
2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink
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