One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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just sometimes...
the deep royal blue night
and a bright sickle moon.

7 comments:

Spiros Zafiris said...

..very alluring; like it
much..>>spiros

Alan Summers said...

Thank you Spiros! ;-)

all my very best

Alan
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Beatrice V said...

Just so beautiful, Alan, I love it.

Möme said...

I really like it too!

Alan Summers said...

Thank you!

I may yet work it into a tanka too. ;-)

all my very best

Alan
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Carlos Gesmundo said...

Enjoyed this.

Best wishes.

Carlos

Alan Summers said...

Thank you Carlos. I feel this poem has possible legs, so encouragement is much appreciated. ;-)

all my very best

Alan
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