One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


the moon still awake
shadows of a passing bus
on the cherry tree


Area 17 said...

I love it, somehow you have avoided sensory and image overload even though there's a lot in, and to the haiku.

I adore that first line!

I love the interaction with the last two lines!

all my very best

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Kelly M. said...

beautiful contrast of moon and the shadow of the bus -- ephemeral!

Spiros Zafiris said...

..yes, indeed, i must agree,
very catching..>>spiros