I love it, somehow you have avoided sensory and image overload even though there's a lot in, and to the haiku.I adore that first line!I love the interaction with the last two lines! all my very bestAlan2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink.
beautiful contrast of moon and the shadow of the bus -- ephemeral!
..yes, indeed, i must agree,very catching..>>spiros
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