Hi Damien,I really like this one. October ladybirds are Asian ladybirds aka ladybugs.Glad you aren't killing them as some people are.Not sure you need the ellipsis e.g.Asian ladybirda few steps in the sunon my shoulderAsian ladybird threat around October.all my best,Alan2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink.
Hi Alan,thank you for your comment : I didn't know about Asian ladybirds.I have even read on Internet that they were sometimes called Halloween lady beetles ...an other way to introduce the seasonAll my bestDamien
Hi Damien,"Halloween lady beetles "That sounds great, maybe a night haiku could incorporate that name?Alan
I love it, and agree with Alan about the ellipsis.
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