Oh, I love this one! Really gives me the image.
Enjoyed this one, as Gemma says, it really gives an image.Sometimes people pack so much into a haiku it's hard to connect, but narrowing down onto a simple image pulls you in.Thanks Gabriel!Alan
Yes! This is one of those more minimalist haikus that allows your brain to soak up the picture given.
This one makes me smile.
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