One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


Sunday evening -
three flat balloons
on a neighbor's gate


dimanche soir -
trois ballons dégonflés
au portail d'un voisin


Gemma said...

Oh, I love this one! Really gives me the image.

Area 17 said...

Enjoyed this one, as Gemma says, it really gives an image.

Sometimes people pack so much into a haiku it's hard to connect, but narrowing down onto a simple image pulls you in.

Thanks Gabriel!


Gemma said...

Yes! This is one of those more minimalist haikus that allows your brain to soak up the picture given.

diana l. said...

This one makes me smile.