One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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a white mist hangs
over frosty grass
the hidden sun
builds layers of light
as the moon looks on

4 comments:

Dennis Tomlinson said...

Thanks to Beatrice for encouraging me to turn my notes on Facebook into a poem.

Alan Summers said...

Wow!

all my very best

Alan
2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink
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Möme said...

Lyrical and lovely.

Dennis Tomlinson said...

Thankls, Alan and Mome