One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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emerging from
the rain- a flock of
berry-hunting robins

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I love this! Full of action, very vivid.

all my very best

Alan
2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink
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Vida said...

Thank you, Alan!

Spiros Zafiris said...

..yess, it sings; it punches;
very quite lyric..>>spiros