One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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half-moon--
the child wonders
the rest

The Mainichi Daily News
Nov. 3, 2010

8 comments:

Dennis Tomlinson said...

A world of imagination in just a few words

P K Padhy said...

Dear Mr Dennis
Many thanks for your kind words and poetic touch.

PK Padhy

me said...

Gorgeous Haiku

Alan Summers said...

I agree with Dennis, his comment is spot on! ;-)

all my very best

Alan
2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink
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Jim Tantillo said...

awesome haiku, really a good one.

Spiros Zafiris said...

..yess, mighty


..spiros
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P K Padhy said...

My respectful regards to Dennis,Maya Idriss,Alan summers,Jim Tantillo and Spiros Zafiris for your kind poetic words.

P K Padhy

Christine L. Villa said...

a very good one! :-)