One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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tonight I am waiting
for frost, bronzed leaves glazed white -
lining the streets

4 comments:

John McDonald said...

lovely picture David
john

Cassiopeia Rises said...

David I can both feel and see your words. Wonderful.


Melanie

diana l. said...
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diana l. said...

Again, I like the image very much but wonder if fewer words might give it more punch...