One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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across the garden
where I've retraced my steps
the snow remembers me

5 comments:

Vida said...

I like that!

Beatrice V said...

this is really lovely!

diana l. said...

I love it!!!!

Möme said...

I love it too!

P K Padhy said...

Very interesting haiku with a philosophical touch.
P K Padhy, India

http://pkpadhy.blogspot.com