One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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the patterns of frost-
black-headed gulls squabble
over a rooftop
.

3 comments:

Beatrice V said...

I think this is wonderful, Alan, just love it!

Alan Summers said...

Thanks Beatrice!

It's still very much a haiku in progress so any encouragement is gratefully received. ;-)

Spiros Zafiris said...

..yea, very visual; good one..!