One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

barren branch
the lone bird choruses
with me

*****
early evening
the bat moves
moonward

Chrysanthemum-10,October 2011

3 comments:

Dennis Tomlinson said...

the bat moves/moonward - a masterly element of surprise

Spiros Zafiris said...

..bravo P.K.

..>>quite memorable..>>spiros

Christine L. Villa said...

I like the word "moonward." lovely haiku!