I love it too, Rachel, really very good one!
So vivid and excellent!P K Padhy
this is not a haiku good but not a haiku
@Sarah Lauren: whether it is a haiku or not, it is subjective. If you measure it by classical standards, it is definitely not a haiku. However, looking a the essence of it in contemporary terms -in my opinion, it is very much a haiku.
Whatever it is, it's sad and wonderful and I've been there (maybe not my BEST shoes...)
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