Autumn

tree shadows
they stretch across morning
traffic

Rachel Green said...: I love this, but is the 'the' in line 2 superfluous?; September 18, 2009
Area 17 said...: You could be right!!! ;-)

Alan; September 18, 2009
Ashi said...: nice one Allan; September 18, 2009
Paul Smith said...: I like this Alan. Are the tree shadows stretching across morning trafic? or perhaps pedestrians stretching out with long strides through the traffic on their way somewhere?
It's got me thinking! And early too!; September 18, 2009
Area 17 said...: It's literally looking out of my lovely window early this morning.

It was tree shadows dominating the main road, and so stretching across both the road and any traffic.

It's very much a haiku in progress, especially as I'd like to know the genus of the trees. It isn't the Lebanon cedar outside my window but trees on the other stretch of green.

Any suggestions glad embraced. ;-)

Alan
Area 17
.; September 18, 2009
Paul Smith said...: Possibly a 'poetree!' ;); September 18, 2009
Pamela A. Babusci said...: good one alan!!!; September 18, 2009
diana l. said...: Really nice. Gives the feeling that nature is reclaiming the earth...; September 19, 2009

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